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SPARED
Author: Severine N. Ndunguru
Setting: Tanzania and Sweden
Publisher: Mkuki na Nyota
Year: 2004
INTRODUCTION
Spared is a thriller. The story
unfolds as two Tanzanian officials, Tom and Chris, discuss about an approaching
official mission to Sweden. While in Sweden, Tom hangs out with Linda, the
daughter of a Swedish multi-millionaire. The two are abducted by the thugs, but
later Tom is set free. To rescue Linda, Chris tries and pleases two
sharp-shooters hidden in Abisko National Parkand in control of powerful
telescopic rifles.
unfolds as two Tanzanian officials, Tom and Chris, discuss about an approaching
official mission to Sweden. While in Sweden, Tom hangs out with Linda, the
daughter of a Swedish multi-millionaire. The two are abducted by the thugs, but
later Tom is set free. To rescue Linda, Chris tries and pleases two
sharp-shooters hidden in Abisko National Parkand in control of powerful
telescopic rifles.
The story reveals how Tanzanian officials betray the majority of
Tanzanians by working for the interests of European imperialists; and use their
positions to accumulate wealth. Indeed this is unforgettable story, well
crafted, well written and pleasure to read.
Tanzanians by working for the interests of European imperialists; and use their
positions to accumulate wealth. Indeed this is unforgettable story, well
crafted, well written and pleasure to read.
CHARACTERIZATION
Talking about a character we talk about a person in a story.
Characters in this novel, Spared are not real but are there to
demonstrate different roles played by different people in our society. Through
the characters found in this novel, the author, S.N. Ndunguru has
succeeded to uncover different evils done by some leaders to whom we gave our
trust and let them represent us in different governmental issues.
Characters in this novel, Spared are not real but are there to
demonstrate different roles played by different people in our society. Through
the characters found in this novel, the author, S.N. Ndunguru has
succeeded to uncover different evils done by some leaders to whom we gave our
trust and let them represent us in different governmental issues.
Together with Chris Mayesa and Tom Nyirenda who are the main
characters, this novel incorporates many other characters who to their parts
they have contributed successfully to make the entire thing.
characters, this novel incorporates many other characters who to their parts
they have contributed successfully to make the entire thing.
Some of these characters can be described as follows:
Chris Mayesa (Chris)
He is the principal of the Institute of Land Development (ILD) and
the former professor at the University of Dar es Salaam.
the former professor at the University of Dar es Salaam.
Chris is a brave and lucky man who believes in power of prayers
whenever he is in a risky mission. Prayers make him rescue Linda from the hands
of abductors at Abisko National Park; and also prayers makes him spared
miraculously from bomb blast at Ngindo Hotel.
whenever he is in a risky mission. Prayers make him rescue Linda from the hands
of abductors at Abisko National Park; and also prayers makes him spared
miraculously from bomb blast at Ngindo Hotel.
Chris represents the group of people who feel pity when their
friends are in difficulty situations; and who are ready to sacrifice their
lives so as to save their friends from difficulty situations.
friends are in difficulty situations; and who are ready to sacrifice their
lives so as to save their friends from difficulty situations.
Tom Nyirenda (Tom)
He is the Permanent Secretary of the Ministry of Lands and
Environment and the former commissioner of mines, the position which he later
reclaims after the mission in Sweden. He is also the chairman of the Institute
of Land Development (ILD) Board Meeting.
Environment and the former commissioner of mines, the position which he later
reclaims after the mission in Sweden. He is also the chairman of the Institute
of Land Development (ILD) Board Meeting.
Tom represents the corrupt leaders who work for the interests of
European imperialists; and who use their positions to accumulate as much wealth
as possible while the majority they lead are living in extreme poverty.
European imperialists; and who use their positions to accumulate as much wealth
as possible while the majority they lead are living in extreme poverty.
He is the Minister of Lands and Environment and the former student
of Chris Mayesa at the University of Dar es Salaam. He later loses his position
as the Minister of Lands and environment and become an ordinary ‘tax bubu’ driver
although he regards himself as a tour operator, a title which carried a little
more esteem.
of Chris Mayesa at the University of Dar es Salaam. He later loses his position
as the Minister of Lands and environment and become an ordinary ‘tax bubu’ driver
although he regards himself as a tour operator, a title which carried a little
more esteem.
He collaborates with Van Meer and Claus Schuller to bomb down
Ngindo Hotel, the act which led the three of them to face life sentence in
prison.
Ngindo Hotel, the act which led the three of them to face life sentence in
prison.
Msokonde represents the corrupt leaders who misuse their power by
making different decisions unlawful so as to favor their friends.
making different decisions unlawful so as to favor their friends.
Professor David Chambakare
He is a political refugee from Kondowe to Tanzania who works as a
Chief Academic Officer at the Institute of Land Development (ILD); and the
competent professor in mathematics department. His marital life and different
political dangers he had gone through in Kondowe led him to the heavy drinking
habit so as to reduce frustration. Chambakare lost his wife, Tsala in the hands
of Mr. Mwampakati, one among the top officials of the ruling party – Kondowe
People’s Party (KPP). He also lost his job as a professor at the University of
Kondowe; and he sent to prison after being known to the authority that he is
organizing a movement to overthrow the government.
Chief Academic Officer at the Institute of Land Development (ILD); and the
competent professor in mathematics department. His marital life and different
political dangers he had gone through in Kondowe led him to the heavy drinking
habit so as to reduce frustration. Chambakare lost his wife, Tsala in the hands
of Mr. Mwampakati, one among the top officials of the ruling party – Kondowe
People’s Party (KPP). He also lost his job as a professor at the University of
Kondowe; and he sent to prison after being known to the authority that he is
organizing a movement to overthrow the government.
Tsala Chambakare
She is the wife of Prof. David Chambakare. Tsala betrayed her
husband, Prof. Chambakare by eloping with Mr. Mwampakati, one among the top
officials of KPP.
husband, Prof. Chambakare by eloping with Mr. Mwampakati, one among the top
officials of KPP.
Tsala represents the women in the society who are not faithful to
their husbands.
their husbands.
Mr. Mwampakati
He is one of the top officials of Kondowe ruling party, KPP. He
eloped with Tsala, Chambakare’s wife when Chambakare was in prison.
eloped with Tsala, Chambakare’s wife when Chambakare was in prison.
Mr. Martin Wickman
He is a well known Swedish multi-millionaire who owns mining
companies in Africa as well as in South America. Mr. Wickman uses Tom as a
commissioner of mines to acquire and control mining companies in Tanzania.
companies in Africa as well as in South America. Mr. Wickman uses Tom as a
commissioner of mines to acquire and control mining companies in Tanzania.
Mr. Martin Wickman represents some European imperialists who use
corrupt leaders to exploit wealth in developing countries.
corrupt leaders to exploit wealth in developing countries.
Linda Wickman
She is the daughter of the Swedish multi-millionaire, Martin
Wickman. She is also the chairperson of Wickman’s company meetings.
Wickman. She is also the chairperson of Wickman’s company meetings.
Linda was kidnapped with Tom by the people who betrayed by her
father, Mr. Wickman; but she later rescued by Chris.
father, Mr. Wickman; but she later rescued by Chris.
Hon. Shedrick Yalomba
He is the Member of Parliament representing Uyanja in Mbinga
district who later appointed to be the Minister of Lands, Water and Minerals.
He is very vocal Member of Parliament before he becomes a minister and he
probably given the ministry so as to silence him from his continuous criticism
to the government.
district who later appointed to be the Minister of Lands, Water and Minerals.
He is very vocal Member of Parliament before he becomes a minister and he
probably given the ministry so as to silence him from his continuous criticism
to the government.
Gustav Hanson
He is Wickman’s Land Surveyor who helped Mr. Wickman to open gold
mines in Lukalasi and Mpepo.
mines in Lukalasi and Mpepo.
He collaborates with Goran Frisk and Peter Lindberg to kidnap
Linda Wickman so as to make Mr.
Linda Wickman so as to make Mr.
Wickman pay for the betrayal he made to them by throwing them out
of the company.
of the company.
Van Meer
He is a South African Businessman. He collaborated with Peter
Msokonde and Claus Schuller to bomb Ngindo hotel so that for the immediate
future the Ngindo Island might be abandoned as a dangerous place, thus leaving
room for them to try and acquire it easily.
Msokonde and Claus Schuller to bomb Ngindo hotel so that for the immediate
future the Ngindo Island might be abandoned as a dangerous place, thus leaving
room for them to try and acquire it easily.
THEMES
Corruption
Corruption is an
act of being dishonest in operations which
affect interests of the public.
act of being dishonest in operations which
affect interests of the public.
Corruption also includes exploitation of power for personal gain.
In the novel, Tom is seen as corrupt because he
makes decisions in the government without considering the welfare of the
majority he leads. This can be clearly shown when he gives mining contracts to
the Wickmans for his personal gains.
makes decisions in the government without considering the welfare of the
majority he leads. This can be clearly shown when he gives mining contracts to
the Wickmans for his personal gains.
Hon Peter Msokonde is also corrupt as he uses his
power to influence his subordinates issue land tittles to his friends while he
knows quite well that the plots are either in open spaces in city master plan
or are already issued to other people. As he says, “Don’t mind what they say
about double allocation. Give him a plot and we can advise the
President to revoke the other man’s title….” (Page 79) Also he is
corrupt because he wants to sell illegally Ngindo Island to his friend, Van
Meer.
power to influence his subordinates issue land tittles to his friends while he
knows quite well that the plots are either in open spaces in city master plan
or are already issued to other people. As he says, “Don’t mind what they say
about double allocation. Give him a plot and we can advise the
President to revoke the other man’s title….” (Page 79) Also he is
corrupt because he wants to sell illegally Ngindo Island to his friend, Van
Meer.
Mr. Oswald Mkangama is also corrupt because he
accepts the offer by Tom and therefore he persuades the President to favor Tom
and make him a commissioner of mines.
accepts the offer by Tom and therefore he persuades the President to favor Tom
and make him a commissioner of mines.
Betrayal
Betrayal may simply means “going
against promise”. It may also refers to harm or being unfaithful to
a country or another person by helping an enemy or giving information that is
confidential. In this novel we see betrayal in the following ways:
against promise”. It may also refers to harm or being unfaithful to
a country or another person by helping an enemy or giving information that is
confidential. In this novel we see betrayal in the following ways:
Betrayal committed by Tom Nyirenda to
his country, Tanzania, by working for the interest of European
imperialist, Martin Wickman for his own benefit. We see how Tom betrays his
country by signing fake mining contracts with Mr. Wickman the thing which
enables Mr. Wickman to acquire mining companies in Tanzania especially gold
mines at Mpepo and Lukalasi in Mbinga district; and ruby mines at Matombo and
Mahenge in Morogoro and Ulanga districts. Also Tom betrays his
country as he uses public funds to travel to Sweden to finalize his connections
with Wickman.
his country, Tanzania, by working for the interest of European
imperialist, Martin Wickman for his own benefit. We see how Tom betrays his
country by signing fake mining contracts with Mr. Wickman the thing which
enables Mr. Wickman to acquire mining companies in Tanzania especially gold
mines at Mpepo and Lukalasi in Mbinga district; and ruby mines at Matombo and
Mahenge in Morogoro and Ulanga districts. Also Tom betrays his
country as he uses public funds to travel to Sweden to finalize his connections
with Wickman.
Betrayal also had shown by Tsala to her
huband Chambakare when she left him and elopes with Mwampakati the
thing which frustrates Mr. Chambakare and make him drink heavily.
huband Chambakare when she left him and elopes with Mwampakati the
thing which frustrates Mr. Chambakare and make him drink heavily.
Claus Schuller also betrayed his colleagues
Msokonde and Meer when he revealed their bombing mission and mentioned their
names to the police officers.
Msokonde and Meer when he revealed their bombing mission and mentioned their
names to the police officers.
Mr. Martin Wickman also betrayed workers, the
land surveyor, Gustav Hanson and mining engineers, Peter Lindberg and Goran
Frisk by buying their shares and throw them out of the company. This thing
makes them angry; and they abducts Linda so as to make Mr. Wickman pay.
land surveyor, Gustav Hanson and mining engineers, Peter Lindberg and Goran
Frisk by buying their shares and throw them out of the company. This thing
makes them angry; and they abducts Linda so as to make Mr. Wickman pay.
Nepotism
Nepotism is favoritism shown by somebody in power to relatives and
friends, especially in appointing them to good positions or by giving them some
privileges whether they deserve or not. In the novel, the appointment of Peter
Msokonde and Shedrick Yalomba as ministers has some sort of favoritism because
they both lacked qualities of being ministers; and instead Shedrick Yalomba is
appointed in order to silence him form his continuous criticism to the
government; and Peter Msokonde is appointed simply because he had been noticed
by ruling party bosses as a political activist among University students.
Msokonde’s appointment does not regard either his age, education or his
experience.
friends, especially in appointing them to good positions or by giving them some
privileges whether they deserve or not. In the novel, the appointment of Peter
Msokonde and Shedrick Yalomba as ministers has some sort of favoritism because
they both lacked qualities of being ministers; and instead Shedrick Yalomba is
appointed in order to silence him form his continuous criticism to the
government; and Peter Msokonde is appointed simply because he had been noticed
by ruling party bosses as a political activist among University students.
Msokonde’s appointment does not regard either his age, education or his
experience.
Also we see how Msokonde orders his subordinates to give plots to
his friends although they do not deserve. We can see this when Msokonde orders
Tom by saying, “Ensure he gets the plot. He’s my close friend….”
(Page 79)
his friends although they do not deserve. We can see this when Msokonde orders
Tom by saying, “Ensure he gets the plot. He’s my close friend….”
(Page 79)
In the novel also we see how Mr. Oswald Mkangama favors Tom by
persuading the President to post Tom as a commissioner of mines simply because
Tom had promised to
persuading the President to post Tom as a commissioner of mines simply because
Tom had promised to
include Mr. Mkangama in the board of Wickman’s company.
Hypocrisy
In question, hypocrisy is the act of pretending
to have some moral standards or beliefs that you do not really have.
to have some moral standards or beliefs that you do not really have.
In the novel, Spared, Tom is hypocrite as
he pretends to serve the government while he is actually works for the
interests of European imperialist; and also he is there to enrich himself with
the posts entrusted to him.
he pretends to serve the government while he is actually works for the
interests of European imperialist; and also he is there to enrich himself with
the posts entrusted to him.
Peter Msokonde is also hypocrite as he pretends
to feel sorry for the removal of Tom from the Ministry of Lands and Environment
while he is the one who told the President to punish Tom for what he did in
Sweden.
to feel sorry for the removal of Tom from the Ministry of Lands and Environment
while he is the one who told the President to punish Tom for what he did in
Sweden.
Tsala Chambakare is also hypocrite as she
pretends to love her husband David Chambakare while she is eloping with Mr.
Mwampakati.
pretends to love her husband David Chambakare while she is eloping with Mr.
Mwampakati.
Exploitation
We can define the term exploitation as the practice of taking
selfish or unfair advantage of a person or situation, usually for personal gain
and without paying proper benefit for it.
selfish or unfair advantage of a person or situation, usually for personal gain
and without paying proper benefit for it.
Martin Wickman is seen as an exploiter since he exploits the
people who work for him. We see how he exploits Gregesen by using his man power
without raising his salary; also we see how Mr. Wickman exploits Gustav and his
colleagues in his mining companies, the thing which makes them decide to kidnap
Linda so as to get their due.
people who work for him. We see how he exploits Gregesen by using his man power
without raising his salary; also we see how Mr. Wickman exploits Gustav and his
colleagues in his mining companies, the thing which makes them decide to kidnap
Linda so as to get their due.
We see also how Mr. Wickman takes advantage of poverty in the
country to exploit the available resources, especially in Tanzania.
country to exploit the available resources, especially in Tanzania.
Love
Love can be defined as the feeling of tender affection for
somebody such as a close relative or friend, or for something such as a place,
an ideal, or even to an animal. When showing love one may be sincere (true) or
insincere (hypocritical).
somebody such as a close relative or friend, or for something such as a place,
an ideal, or even to an animal. When showing love one may be sincere (true) or
insincere (hypocritical).
In this novel we can see both sincere and insincere love.
Sincere love is shown by Chris
Mayesa when he is ready to sacrifice his life so as to save life of his
friends. We can see how Chris sacrifices his life so as to rescue Linda from
the hands of abductors at Abisko National Park. Also we can see how Chris
fights with all his heart so as to save the life of his friend, Tom when he was
attacked by lung cancer. In this novel, Spared we can see how
Chris feels sympathy and sorrow for the misfortune of others; something which
makes him act out of love and compassion.
Mayesa when he is ready to sacrifice his life so as to save life of his
friends. We can see how Chris sacrifices his life so as to rescue Linda from
the hands of abductors at Abisko National Park. Also we can see how Chris
fights with all his heart so as to save the life of his friend, Tom when he was
attacked by lung cancer. In this novel, Spared we can see how
Chris feels sympathy and sorrow for the misfortune of others; something which
makes him act out of love and compassion.
Sincere love is also shown by
Prof. David Chambakare to his wife Tsala as he forgives her and forgets
all the pain she caused to him; and agrees to take her as his wife again.
Prof. David Chambakare to his wife Tsala as he forgives her and forgets
all the pain she caused to him; and agrees to take her as his wife again.
Insincere love in this novel has
shown by Tsala Chambakare to her husband David Chambakare as she
leaves him alone and elopes with another man, Mwampakati.
shown by Tsala Chambakare to her husband David Chambakare as she
leaves him alone and elopes with another man, Mwampakati.
Also insincere love is shown by Tom Nyirenda as
he betrays his country by pretending to serve the government while he is
actually working for the interest of the European imperialists; and enrich
himself.
he betrays his country by pretending to serve the government while he is
actually working for the interest of the European imperialists; and enrich
himself.
Religious belief
Shortly, belief refers to a vague idea in which some confidence is
placed. In this novel we see how Chris places his confidence in prayers
especially when he is in a risky mission. Chris prays to his God to protect him
and make him strong before and when he is about to rescue Linda from the hands
of abductors by reciting Psalm 121 “I will lift up mine eyes unto the
hills…. from whence
placed. In this novel we see how Chris places his confidence in prayers
especially when he is in a risky mission. Chris prays to his God to protect him
and make him strong before and when he is about to rescue Linda from the hands
of abductors by reciting Psalm 121 “I will lift up mine eyes unto the
hills…. from whence
comes my help? My help cometh from the Lord who made heaven and
earth”……. “The Lord shall
earth”……. “The Lord shall
preserve thee from all evils; he shall preserve thy soul. The Lord
shall preserve thy going out and thy coming in form this time forth, and even
for evermore.” (Page 51) Prayer makes Chris strong and
successful to every mission he commits.
shall preserve thy going out and thy coming in form this time forth, and even
for evermore.” (Page 51) Prayer makes Chris strong and
successful to every mission he commits.
Patriotism
Patriotism is simply means love of country and willingness to
sacrifice for it. One is considered to be a patriot as he is a proud supporter
or defender of his/her country and its way of life.
sacrifice for it. One is considered to be a patriot as he is a proud supporter
or defender of his/her country and its way of life.
In the novel we see how Prof. David Chambakare fight with all his
heart so as to make sure his country, Kondowe is having a democratically
installed government. We see how Chambakare passes through different political
dangers by organizing a movement to overthrow the dictatorial government in
Kondowe the thing which makes him sent to prison, loose his job and his wife.
Chambakare is doing all these out of love for his country. On other side of the
coin we see how Tanzanian leaders lack patriotism and use their positions for
their own gain.
heart so as to make sure his country, Kondowe is having a democratically
installed government. We see how Chambakare passes through different political
dangers by organizing a movement to overthrow the dictatorial government in
Kondowe the thing which makes him sent to prison, loose his job and his wife.
Chambakare is doing all these out of love for his country. On other side of the
coin we see how Tanzanian leaders lack patriotism and use their positions for
their own gain.
Sacrifice
If you like you may refer sacrifice as an act of
giving up of something valuable (even life) for somebody or something else
considered being of more value or importance.
giving up of something valuable (even life) for somebody or something else
considered being of more value or importance.
In the novel we see how Chris sacrifices his life
so as to rescue Linda from the hands of abductors at Abisko National Park inSweden.
Chris knows well that the assignment of rescuing Linda may cost his life; but
accompanied by prayers he is ready to undertake the risk so as to arescue Linda;
so as to rescue Linda from the hands of abductors at Abisko National Park inSweden.
Chris knows well that the assignment of rescuing Linda may cost his life; but
accompanied by prayers he is ready to undertake the risk so as to arescue Linda;
as he says “I
have made up my mind to carry out this assignment. I have an inner certitude
that he who
made heaven and earth will preserve me.” (Page 51)
have made up my mind to carry out this assignment. I have an inner certitude
that he who
made heaven and earth will preserve me.” (Page 51)
Also we see how Prof. David Chambakare sacrifices his
life as he endangers his life by organizing a movement to overthrow the
dictatorial government in his country. Although his acts lead him to lose his
job, his wife, send him to prison and later become a political refugee in
Tanzania, someday Chambakare returns to Kondowe, and ensures that the
democratic government is installed in Kondowe.
life as he endangers his life by organizing a movement to overthrow the
dictatorial government in his country. Although his acts lead him to lose his
job, his wife, send him to prison and later become a political refugee in
Tanzania, someday Chambakare returns to Kondowe, and ensures that the
democratic government is installed in Kondowe.
Conflict
Conflict is a disagreement between people
which leads to some sort of misunderstanding.
which leads to some sort of misunderstanding.
As we can see in this novel conflict occurs
between the Permanent Secretary of the Ministry of Lands and Environment, Tom
Nyirenda and his minister, Hon. Peter Msokonde as the result of their
differences in interests.
between the Permanent Secretary of the Ministry of Lands and Environment, Tom
Nyirenda and his minister, Hon. Peter Msokonde as the result of their
differences in interests.
Also there is conflict between Mr. Wickman and
his workers, Gustav, Goran and Lindberg which resulted to the abduction of
Linda.
his workers, Gustav, Goran and Lindberg which resulted to the abduction of
Linda.
We can see also political conflicts at Kondowe
where David Chambakare had a quarrel with the authority, the thing which makes
him become a political refugee in Tanzania.
where David Chambakare had a quarrel with the authority, the thing which makes
him become a political refugee in Tanzania.
Terrorism
Terrorism may simply refer to an act of using force in order to
achieve a certain desired goal.
achieve a certain desired goal.
Terrorism may include bombing, kidnapping, and assassination.
In this novel terrorism is witnessed when Gustav and his
colleagues force payment from Mr.
colleagues force payment from Mr.
Wickman by kidnapping her daughter, Linda at Abisko National Park
in Sweden.
in Sweden.
Also terrorism is witnessed when Msokonde collaborated with Van
Meer, the South African investor and Claus Schuller so as to bomb Ngindo Hotel
in Ngindo Island.
Meer, the South African investor and Claus Schuller so as to bomb Ngindo Hotel
in Ngindo Island.
The position of woman
The author of this novel has portrayed a woman in different ways
as follows:
as follows:
First, the author has described a woman as a good family keeper;
as we can see how Susan treated her husband Tom; and how she took care of him
when he was sick.
as we can see how Susan treated her husband Tom; and how she took care of him
when he was sick.
Second, the author has shown us the strength of woman on
supervising different projects successfully; as we can see how Linda Wickman
chaired Wickman’s Company meetings successfully; and through her good
supervision, the company operates profitably.
supervising different projects successfully; as we can see how Linda Wickman
chaired Wickman’s Company meetings successfully; and through her good
supervision, the company operates profitably.
Third, the author has portrayed a woman as weak creature who
controlled by men. This can be clearly shown by Tsala Chambakare who is first
married to Chambakare, and then to Mwampakati, then she comes back to
Chambakare. This act of changing men shows us how Tsala lacks a stand and leave
a room for men to control her life.
controlled by men. This can be clearly shown by Tsala Chambakare who is first
married to Chambakare, and then to Mwampakati, then she comes back to
Chambakare. This act of changing men shows us how Tsala lacks a stand and leave
a room for men to control her life.
Use of Literary
Devices in Spared
Devices in Spared
The major literary devices appeared in this novel are point of view, dialogue
and
exclamation.
(i) Point of View
The author uses the first person point of view techniques in this
novel, wherein the story is told by the narrator from his or her
standpoint. For example, the following sentence in the story is built by
the first person pronoun:
novel, wherein the story is told by the narrator from his or her
standpoint. For example, the following sentence in the story is built by
the first person pronoun:
“I dutifully obeyed and re-entered the cabin.
This, of course, was
This, of course, was
a step I had not anticipated in the scenario I
had committed to
had committed to
memory” (p. 55).
The point of view manipulates the reader’s understanding of the
narrative and determines the angle or perception of the unfolding story,
and thus influences the tone under which the story takes place.
narrative and determines the angle or perception of the unfolding story,
and thus influences the tone under which the story takes place.
(ii) Dialogue
In this story dialogue is commonly used:
“Did you once tell me you taught him?” Tom
asked.
asked.
“Yeah, for three years during his undergraduate
Course”
Course”
“How did you rate him?” (p. 3).
“You say he called you by your first name?”
Tom asked incredulously.
“Yes, I was surprised beyond measure”
“And he said he was the one who gave me the
money?”
money?”
“Yes”
“And he said you should say “Hallo” to me?”
“That is exactly what he said”
“Couldn’t you tell who he was from his voice?”
(p. 62).
(p. 62).
“His boss”, she said, “How did you like that?”
“That what?”
“Me being fondled by that while man”
“Which white man?” (p. 118).
The use of dialogue in this story help the reader to embrace the
characters. Ndunguru uses a lot of dialogue at least in each chapter. For
example on (p. 62) Tom Nyirenda narrates the story of his adventure to
Chris so as to horrify him.
characters. Ndunguru uses a lot of dialogue at least in each chapter. For
example on (p. 62) Tom Nyirenda narrates the story of his adventure to
Chris so as to horrify him.
(iii) Exclamation
Exclamations such as Good Lord, no! (p. 26), are
used by Chris when he narrates the story of the woman who is with Tom, and
how she was kidnapped before him, so Peter worried that Tom might have
died. More over “Good
gracious!” on (p. 60) said by Chris to show sympathy to Tom that he is
not praying. But due to problem he prayed. “Damn
you!” on (p. 136) is used by Mr. Van Meer when lamenting to Claus after
having caught at the airport for his terrorism against Tom and Chris’ hotel.
used by Chris when he narrates the story of the woman who is with Tom, and
how she was kidnapped before him, so Peter worried that Tom might have
died. More over “Good
gracious!” on (p. 60) said by Chris to show sympathy to Tom that he is
not praying. But due to problem he prayed. “Damn
you!” on (p. 136) is used by Mr. Van Meer when lamenting to Claus after
having caught at the airport for his terrorism against Tom and Chris’ hotel.
Exclamation words one used by the author impress the action which
has happened, hence the reader’s interest is around.
has happened, hence the reader’s interest is around.